That’s such a heartfelt and emotional story—really captures the rollercoaster of trust, fear, and ultimately love. The twists were intense, especially when Lizzie thought Will was living a double life, and the relief that followed was just as powerful. The way it all tied back to their love and dreams for the future felt so real and relatable.
Have you thought about adding more of Lizzie’s internal struggle, maybe expanding on how she processes her emotions after finding out the truth? It could really deepen the emotional impact even further.
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